Snowflare [16x16]

Snowflare

Creeps go both directions, aside from that, nothing fancy.
Post edited: .jpg edited

Sample 1:

snowflare.jpg (53.95 KiB) Viewed 3423 times

Sample 2:

snowflare2.jpg (56.19 KiB) Viewed 3423 times

Sample 3:

snowflare3.jpg (217.52 KiB) Viewed 3423 times

Path .txt :

# Map data
# compiled by CreepTD Map Editor 1.0.1
# at Mon, 03 Feb 2014 19:52:53 GMT

@author GhostStalker
@strict
@size 16x16

# Path segments
4,13 start
4,12
4,11
4,10
4,9
4,8
4,7
4,6
4,5
5,4
6,4
7,4
8,4
9,4
10,4
11,5
11,6
11,7
11,8
11,9
11,10
11,11
11,12
11,13
12,14
13,14
14,13
14,12
13,11
12,11
11,11
10,11
9,11
8,11
7,11
6,11
5,11
4,10
4,9
4,8
4,7
4,6
4,5
5,4
6,4
7,4
8,4
9,4
10,4
11,4
12,4
13,4 end

13,4 start
12,4
11,4
10,4
9,4
8,4
7,4
6,4
5,4
4,5
4,6
4,7
4,8
4,9
4,10
5,11
6,11
7,11
8,11
9,11
10,11
11,11
12,11
13,11
14,12
14,13
13,14
12,14
11,13
11,12
11,11
11,10
11,9
11,8
11,7
11,6
11,5
10,4
9,4
8,4
7,4
6,4
5,4
4,5
4,6
4,7
4,8
4,9
4,10
4,11
4,12
4,13 end


# Blocked coordinates
0;15
0;14
0;13
0;12
0;11
0;10
0;9
0;8
0;7
0;6
0;5
0;4
0;3
0;2
0;1
0;0
1;0
2;0
3;0
4;0
5;0
6;0
7;0
8;0
9;0
10;0
11;0
12;0
13;0
14;0
15;0
15;1
15;2
15;3
15;4
1;15
2;15
3;15
4;15
1;14
1;13
1;12
1;11
1;10
1;9
1;8
1;7
1;6
1;5
1;4
1;3
1;2
1;1
2;1
3;1
4;1
5;1
6;1
7;1
8;1
10;1
9;1
11;1
12;1
13;1
14;1
2;14
2;2
14;2

[Seraph07]

Please try to let the path free from the grid.
Also I am not realy sure if I understand the start and ending position right.
Please show us the way of the creeps, it would help us very much.

Like the first pathdesign, but boring standard background. Path isn´t really exciting.

[Pezinator]

Snowflar_rating.jpg (189.52 KiB) Viewed 3361 times

ZIP-File
Before I am going into detail about the map. There is a bunch of things wrong with you path file. A path has to start with an underground element and has to end with them. In your case you can't start the path outside of the map as normally, but you need to start with an underground segment. That would mean 4,14 is underground.
Next thing missing is the empty line at the end of the mapfile.

Most map things have been said already, so I'd keep that short. You need to remove the raster from the path.
The map border don't fit in Multiplayer. That's really a big pitty. Cause the background would look quite nice actually. Although I am not sure whether the background will distract you or not.

A big discussion about this map will be about the path. I cannot make any predicts here about how it will be to play the map. But if you force me I'd say it will be really complicated to defend it. And I am not sure if it's gonna be fun, but we'll see that if the map makes it into testing.
But I'll only give it into internal discussion if you Improve all the things I've mentioned.

I think the background is a bit confused, what appears to be confetti intermixed with a few snowflakes....
The coloring is interesting, but doesn't tie into the snowflakes.

I like the coloring and texture of the path

The Path..I like the concept of the head on creeps, nice idea!
Can you extend the start and finish to the edges, to appease the masses?

Also can you show the map editor picture so I can visually see all of the blocked areas?

[krunx]

Siehe pezi, was verbessert werden muss.

Nice Map
ceep creating

Magge

[Seraph07]

Remove the raster from the path and add a border around the map.

Path ok.
Design not ok.