DesktopAttack 32x16

Deutsch:
Hier geht es darum, sich im PC vor Viren (=Creeps) zu schützen.

Es ist 105 Pfadfelder lang, Start ist rechts, Ende ist links. Es gibt 3 Haltestellen, die den Weg gegrenzt hat.

Der Pfad hab ich in Paint.net editiert, so sry für "Undeutlichkeit".


English:
The aim here is to protect the PC from viruses (= Creeps).

It is 105 squares long path, starting on the right, the end is left. There are 3 stops, which has borded the way.

The path I've edited in Paint.net, so sry for unclear.


Map DesktopAttack:
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WinRar file to download:
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[Pezinator]

If you are an english guy just write in english. Most of the people in the map forum can speak english and anyway google translated text are harder to read than the english ones

OK. Let's talk about the Map. The idea is ok, but first of all I wouldn't copy your desktop but draw my own one. That means i would draw the icons on the desktop. Moreover I wouldn't show the taskline on the map. That simply doesn't look good. Let's go on. You already sad that the path isn't perfect ok... but the biggest problem is that the path is bigger than one square. Where we reach the next problem. You don't have a grid on the map, which makes it quite hard to see where the path and the fields acutally are. One more last thing: If you screenshot your desktop, please delet things such as the calendar.

That path is bigger than one square, it was my plan.

Problems:

Copyright:
-Skype
-Thunderbird
-Minecraft
-.....
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Path:
-No Grid
-Green Creeps almost invisible

Background:
............... i know this picture
Red Towers hard to see on some places

That path is bigger than one square, it was my plan.

You know, drawing a path is not creating a path.
You also need to "script" the path. Everything else will be - if its not blocked - an area to build. You just can't make them walk over 1,5 fields. Towers will be built ON the path.

I just guess you are not the best designer (no offense), so maybe i can send you a grid if you can't create one.

Idee ganz gut, da geht Grafisch aber noch deutlich mehr!

[Seraph07]

Path is ok.
Design is not ok.